Many students fall into the trap of writing in an unnatural style. They mistakenly feel they should adopt an academic air, resulting in a dull, long-winded and boring essay. They write to impress the tutor with a learned tone thats old-fashioned and full of stylistic problems.
Does this sound like your first experience writing a college essay? You look at the question set, go to the library a photocopy sheets of material on the subject, spend hours anguishing over the subject, write a formal, academic-sounding essay to impress the tutor with your newly gained knowledge. You count your words and find youve only drafted 2,200 of the required 3,000-word minimum. So you go over your paper, adding some quotations, expanding your points and padding out your style to get to the all-important word count. The result is a C-grade at best. Why? Because you have fallen into the classic errors of most students.
Your tutor wants a clear and concise style so he or she can concentrate on the facts and arguments. Here is the difference between the styles:
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Clear Style
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The experiments were conducted in order to determine the lowest possible temperature at which a reaction could occur. It was shown that 30 degrees Fahrenheit was the lowest ambient temperature necessary for the chemical to change from a solid to a liquid state.
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The experiments show heating the chemical to 30 degrees Fahrenheit consistently caused it to melt.
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The preliminary analysis of the results that were first gathered showed to a certain degree there was a propensity of consumers expenditure to decrease by a greater percentage than the increase in price differentials. Subsequent research of data collected over a significant time period lessened the consistency of this finding unless there were exceptional circumstances.
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The first two surveys showed consumers cut spending by an average of 12 percent for every 10 percent rise in prices. Six follow-up surveys found that unless there was scarcity or rationing, consumers continued to be price sensitive.
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Clear Style
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In considering the factors contributing to a decline in the propensity to vote for the major political parties, it is apparent that family voting patterns have been historically significant. However, in recent times, the influence of parental voting patterns has lessened due to population demographic factors.
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Between 1900 and 1950, if both your parents voted Democratic or Republican, there was a 85 percent likelihood you would also vote for that party. Since 1950, higher divorce rates, wider college education, and better news coverage and analysis mean the influence of your parents political choice is lessening.
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The best writing style shows the author is on top of the subject, understands its meaning and writes about it with confidence. The best writing does not need ways to dress up ideas in a complicated or abstract style. Good writers use short sentences, active verbs, specific information and a natural language. They use examples and analogies to make writing varied, interesting and memorable. They cut out every redundant word and replace complex words with simpler words to produce a clear, concise and readable document.
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